Three Word Wednesday again. Today’s three words:
Bubble
Lumber
Wreck
This time, I managed what I think of as a real haiku – nature imagery, two contrasting images, and a sort-of Buddhist view of the cycles of the world. What do you think?
A Quiet Disruption
by J.M. Mendur
Spring wrecks Winter’s spell –
The bear lumbers from his den
when the streams bubble.
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6 comments:
Wonderful.
well done.
Indeed a great attempt and you succeeded too..
Very visual.
I'm impressed that you fit the three words together so nicely, especially difficult considering the form of your poem is a haiku!
I was so impressed with your weaving together of words that I attempted to emulate you here.
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